TE KAURU CAMP 2018 (2nd draft )
ROLLER COASTER
On the roller coaster it went upside DOWN strat up nearly. Ouch my head i keep hitting my head on the bar the first time I was terrified on it and nerves like I was going to get sick at the end I was happy I went on it and got over my fear so at least I could say I went on it so that was FUN I had butterflies at the start of the ride and at the end of the ride. When we were fine'll finished he the man put us on again so around we go again eyes shut done holding on tight DONE and time to scream done AHHH
hi manaia-jae its keira-sky it was really terrifying at first but now its amazing
ReplyDeleteGood work Manaia-Jae! I really liked how you used different font colours!! Maybe if you re-read your writing it will make sense and have the right spelling.
ReplyDeleteOK THANKS
Deletegrat detail in your witting manaia-jae
ReplyDeletethank you izabela
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